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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Soo I know I did design the outfit myself, but to be say I'm mostly going to critic on the colours and maybe the anatomy. c:
First off- the colour's, they look quite off, You should think of palette's If you want a good looking outfit I suggest looking at some, make sure they fit well together, theses colours.. seem just off to me per say.
Now personally I'd think; a nice black jacket, a light blue top, navy blue pants, black and white shoes. but hey that's my opinion. making it simplistic yet, appealing to others to look at, that's what you gotta aim for, unless you like more details in clothing, that's a different story, I'm not good with those things.
Also to add, whats with the.. line down his tail, that does not seem right to me. its out of place.. not fitting. xD
plus the whole colour going with Psynth's fur looks just.. so very how should I say.. BLAH!
Second off- The anatomy, Now I know your're still beginning at this, but I wanna give you a little help that could help you improve.
First off, the pose it's so simplistic, it's so boring, I suggest drawing body skeletons to help with that, also looking at refs of poses would help.
The muzzle, that bothers me so much, it doesn't even look like one, Look at other fox muzzles, look at psynths, look how off it is, try and practice with them, theres not much I can help with that.
The tail looks like someones holding it up, the tail should be down, not bend up all.. weird like, it looks unnatural.
try practicing drawing tails down, and look at other fox tails for ref's, it could help.. alot
The legs look very bumpy, I know it could be the pant's, but I don't think pants are meant to look like that, it seems like he has bumpy legs.. and no one likes bumpy unnatural legs.
Feet could use some work, not bad though it looks like hes standing on the sides of his feet.. .____.;;
The hands.. PERFECT AMG! *slapped* but really, yes some people, like myself do like to hide the hands under sleeves, but if you have trouble with hand look at your own for ref, I know myself I have trouble with them, but try to practice them alot.
And I know, you drew it with a mouse. not bad for a mouse drawing, could use work tho
Ps.. why are you using a mouse when you have a perfectly good tablet?
Lol, sorry for being a critic, just wanting to help you~ don't take it personally.
-Rinkiny.
Anyways to the actual critique:
Well he does look pretty good and as for the tail I would suggest possibly thinning it out a bit. I do like it's design though. The heels of his shoes can definitely be a little thicker so it can be more visible so the top part of his shoes aren't almost the entire piece themselves and while on the topic the brownish shades make the shoes seem a little "old fashioned" which is most certainly not a bad thing as it can certainly add to character. His head looks fine although feels like something's missing. Think about having him wear glasses every now and then but not 24/7. Anyways really fine job :3
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